Pretty Shade of Grey - A.D. Truax

*This is for the online version before rewrite*

 

This just managed to make it for me because of the short sequel Home Free, seeing as this was not as wrapped up without it, and even then, there is a lot found wanting (development wise). It also felt more often like a friends with benefits read then a romance? Too much unresolved in their relationship and characters. I feel it ends just before it really starts. I also loved having a South African character to read about (passable rep of a sort), for the solo and silly reason that I am one. This was enjoyable, and considering it's only a rough draft, and free, it's great. I just feel like these characters could have grown so much more! I'd like to read it again after it's gone through some editing.

 

Currently down for editing and/or publishing preparation.

Source: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/1731258/1