*Note: fanfiction review*
So, not bad, but one thing wasn't resolved enough for me(show spoiler)
I finished this because it had me curious. I guess that says something about it (skimmed a lot though), but then it ended pretty predictably (but happy I geuss). It's an okay enough read. If you like mpreg fanfics and lots of cliché drama (I know I do on the right occasion), you might even love it. Ultimately what made it just "ok" was that I expected much more from that build up.