The Proposal - Firenation

*Note: fanfiction review*

It was fun, but I just felt that more could have been done considering some of the scenes from the film and the TW characters specific personalities.

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I had my heart set on Derek sitting through an awkward strip show. There are more serious points I thought could have been connected too, like the tattoo scene.

 

Source: http://archiveofourown.org/works/754629/chapters/1409903